#24850 - I wanna let every one know I'm no professional writer I don't dot after every sentence that's why there's alot of spaces I'm sorry if you want an A class story sorry it's just not me yes I spend hours writing these and I appreciate the ratings and comments please post more I read them and try to reply I'm not trying to sound arrogant but this is how I am I do like criticism but about the story not the writing it's self I'm happy you guys enjoy it 4 hours later. Mom dad zoey and kc walk in hey guys hi Jim feeling better defiantly I still got a bit of pain but other than that I'm alright the medicine is helping but making me a bit loopy the doc said it would hey you two Noticing my siblings staring h-h-hi Jim heya k wow it looks like it hurts bad it hurts but I got it for the right reason so yeah I'm gonna wear it around like a gold metal Julie is smiling at me on the edg